Novels on the Brain


Summertime means a break a from school and allows for brain to dwell on things not (directly) related to academics. Dwelling is not always a good thing since it usually equates to keeping me from sleeping, either getting me out of bed late and night or too early in the morn because the brain is simply too restless. What’s got me thinking right now? Novels. Too many of them.

I have one novel completed and revised once. Last August, I received a bunch of great feedback on it and, after mulling things over for awhile, I think I know what changes need to be made. I plan on these being the last major changes before I start shopping it around. When that will be, I don’t really know. So I’ve been thinking about how to incorporate those changes, since I like to have a pretty good idea of what direction I’ll be going in before I start editing because everything needs to tie together by the end.

I broke ground on the beginnings of another (unrelated) novel a few days ago set in an alternate Pacific Northwest around 1870. This novel-in-my-head is the primary culprit for keeping my brain agitated. The basic idea has been rolling around in my head for about two years now, and is part of a trilogy of alternate history, pseudo-Western novels. At this point, I have a good 60-70% of the first novel outlined in my head. While you might note that this is well under 100%, one of the lessons I learned from writing my first novel is that this is probably a good amount to get started. Most of the major events are nailed down, the story has an arc, and I think I know what I’m trying to get at by writing it. Most of this will change during the actual writing, I suspect.

As for the second book in the trilogy (third book on the brain, if you’re counting) that takes place in the Southwestern desert around 1870, I probably have about 20-30% figured out in my head, including some major events that happen at the beginning, middle, and end. Many times when I’m reading, watching TV, or just cruising around, I note things ideas or situations that would fit with this novel. Ideally, I’ll get up to that 60% by the time I get to writing it. The third book in the trilogy is very nebulous, probably only 10% imagined at this point, and takes place in a far-future surrogate Minneapolis. I look forward to imagining more about it.

That’s four novels, only one of which has been written and still needs work. To make matters worse, after buying my story “Eskhara” JJA recommended writing a novel in the same world since it seemed so fertile. Alas, he was right—and early in the morning or late at night I find myself plugging holes and building bridges between sections of the story. Alarmingly, I would guess I’m at the 40-50% point as far as imagining a full-fledged novel; for those of you keeping up, that’s pretty close to “go” time. I feel like I could crank it out in no time.

Of course, you can’t write five novels at once. Or at least I can’t, nor do I want to. My plan (if you can call it that) is to finish revisions on the completed novel before putting significant work into novel #2. This is complicated somewhat by having a new baby, needing to finish my coursework, and taking my preliminary PhD exams. Once the baby is not so new and classes have gone away (for good! yay!) then I should have time (for the first time in about four years) to really focus on writing. As long as I show up to work regularly, I think I can put some serious dents in writing some of these novels.

The hard part will be keeping the short stories at bay during all of this. Ideas are like weeds on the brain: if you don’t get them out by the base, then they just keep coming back. For a long while, novels were too big for me to imagine so I (subconsciously) stuck to writing short stories. Now it seems most ideas I get are novel-length. Lucky me.

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4 Comments

  1. Posted 6/20/2009 at 8:11 am | Permalink

    Good luck. I am dealing with the same embarrassment of ideas, and I note with some dismay that the last time I made a plan for dealing with them, an unanticipated novel demanded to be written, to hell with my plans and the horse they rode in on.

  2. Trent Hergenrader
    Posted 6/20/2009 at 8:44 am | Permalink

    Not be all “writers are victims to the muse” or anything, but it’s friggin’ true! One of the things I’m struggling with on novel #1′s rewrite is that it needs more concrete NYC details but I don’t have the cash or time for a research trip. Amy was a little exasperated by this and said, “Well, the next novel you write needs to be set someplace closer to home.” Erm, yeah. Doesn’t quite work like that, does it?

    I swear, time management is what I struggle with most. With a finite amount of time, what do you work on? Something old that you think has potential? Or something brand new that could be good? Coming up with ideas isn’t a problem for any of the writers I know, as it seems most folks have far too many ideas and far too little time to put them down, especially in words that don’t really suck.

  3. Posted 6/23/2009 at 5:26 pm | Permalink

    You’ve never been to NYC? I can scan you a map if you want and help you with some details. Not that I’m an expert on the city exactly, but I have visited a lot.

  4. Trent Hergenrader
    Posted 6/23/2009 at 6:39 pm | Permalink

    I’ve been to Manhattan but not out to any of the other boroughs (there are episodes in each borough) and I think the parts that happen in the Lower East Side could use more detail. Google maps with the street view helps a lot, but that only takes care of one of the five senses. What I’d like to do is personally trace the events of the novel street by street, but that’s a best case scenario.

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